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Documentation: networking/tcp_ao: typo and grammar fixes
Fix multiple grammatical issues and add a missing period to improve readability. Signed-off-by: Leo Stone <leocstone@gmail.com> Reviewed-by: Simon Horman <horms@kernel.org> Link: https://patch.msgid.link/20240929005001.370991-1-leocstone@gmail.com Signed-off-by: Jakub Kicinski <kuba@kernel.org>
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@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ segments between trusted peers. It adds a new TCP header option with
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a Message Authentication Code (MAC). MACs are produced from the content
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a Message Authentication Code (MAC). MACs are produced from the content
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of a TCP segment using a hashing function with a password known to both peers.
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of a TCP segment using a hashing function with a password known to both peers.
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The intent of TCP-AO is to deprecate TCP-MD5 providing better security,
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The intent of TCP-AO is to deprecate TCP-MD5 providing better security,
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key rotation and support for variety of hashing algorithms.
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key rotation and support for a variety of hashing algorithms.
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1. Introduction
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1. Introduction
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===============
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===============
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@ -164,9 +164,9 @@ A: It should not, no action needs to be performed [7.5.2.e]::
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is not available, no action is required (RNextKeyID of a received
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is not available, no action is required (RNextKeyID of a received
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segment needs to match the MKT’s SendID).
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segment needs to match the MKT’s SendID).
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Q: How current_key is set and when does it change? It is a user-triggered
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Q: How is current_key set, and when does it change? Is it a user-triggered
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change, or is it by a request from the remote peer? Is it set by the user
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change, or is it triggered by a request from the remote peer? Is it set by the
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explicitly, or by a matching rule?
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user explicitly, or by a matching rule?
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A: current_key is set by RNextKeyID [6.1]::
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A: current_key is set by RNextKeyID [6.1]::
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@ -233,8 +233,8 @@ always have one current_key [3.3]::
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Q: Can a non-TCP-AO connection become a TCP-AO-enabled one?
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Q: Can a non-TCP-AO connection become a TCP-AO-enabled one?
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A: No: for already established non-TCP-AO connection it would be impossible
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A: No: for an already established non-TCP-AO connection it would be impossible
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to switch using TCP-AO as the traffic key generation requires the initial
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to switch to using TCP-AO, as the traffic key generation requires the initial
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sequence numbers. Paraphrasing, starting using TCP-AO would require
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sequence numbers. Paraphrasing, starting using TCP-AO would require
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re-establishing the TCP connection.
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re-establishing the TCP connection.
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@ -292,7 +292,7 @@ no transparency is really needed and modern BGP daemons already have
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Linux provides a set of ``setsockopt()s`` and ``getsockopt()s`` that let
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Linux provides a set of ``setsockopt()s`` and ``getsockopt()s`` that let
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userspace manage TCP-AO on a per-socket basis. In order to add/delete MKTs
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userspace manage TCP-AO on a per-socket basis. In order to add/delete MKTs
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``TCP_AO_ADD_KEY`` and ``TCP_AO_DEL_KEY`` TCP socket options must be used
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``TCP_AO_ADD_KEY`` and ``TCP_AO_DEL_KEY`` TCP socket options must be used.
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It is not allowed to add a key on an established non-TCP-AO connection
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It is not allowed to add a key on an established non-TCP-AO connection
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as well as to remove the last key from TCP-AO connection.
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as well as to remove the last key from TCP-AO connection.
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@ -361,7 +361,7 @@ not implemented.
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4. ``setsockopt()`` vs ``accept()`` race
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4. ``setsockopt()`` vs ``accept()`` race
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In contrast with TCP-MD5 established connection which has just one key,
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In contrast with an established TCP-MD5 connection which has just one key,
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TCP-AO connections may have many keys, which means that accepted connections
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TCP-AO connections may have many keys, which means that accepted connections
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on a listen socket may have any amount of keys as well. As copying all those
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on a listen socket may have any amount of keys as well. As copying all those
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keys on a first properly signed SYN would make the request socket bigger, that
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keys on a first properly signed SYN would make the request socket bigger, that
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hanging in the accept queue.
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hanging in the accept queue.
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The reverse is valid as well: if userspace adds a new key for a peer on
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The reverse is valid as well: if userspace adds a new key for a peer on
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a listener socket, the established sockets in accept queue won't
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a listener socket, the established sockets in the accept queue won't
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have the new keys.
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have the new keys.
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At this moment, the resolution for the two races:
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At this moment, the resolution for the two races:
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and ``setsockopt(TCP_AO_DEL_KEY)`` vs ``accept()`` is delegated to userspace.
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and ``setsockopt(TCP_AO_DEL_KEY)`` vs ``accept()`` is delegated to userspace.
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This means that it's expected that userspace would check the MKTs on the socket
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This means that it's expected that userspace would check the MKTs on the socket
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that was returned by ``accept()`` to verify that any key rotation that
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that was returned by ``accept()`` to verify that any key rotation that
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happened on listen socket is reflected on the newly established connection.
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happened on the listen socket is reflected on the newly established connection.
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This is a similar "do-nothing" approach to TCP-MD5 from the kernel side and
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This is a similar "do-nothing" approach to TCP-MD5 from the kernel side and
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may be changed later by introducing new flags to ``tcp_ao_add``
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may be changed later by introducing new flags to ``tcp_ao_add``
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